Profile review M24

The one thing I am most passionate about: I'm most passionate about the people in my life. I enjoy a lot in life but without loved ones to share it with it's not worth a thing. (More specifics please. What people? What do you just love to do with these people? Why are they so important to you?)




The most important thing I am looking for in a person is: Someone who is mature without being boring. You know the kind. Someone who wants a family. Someone who will be who they are regardless of what others think. Someone who can hold down a job (or be committed to school if they are younger). But someone who can still have a good time and be a little crazy if the situations calls for it.(This tells me you're looking for a serious relationship with a confident, committed girl who isn't afraid to let loose and have a good time when the weekend rolls around. Right? If so, that's maybe a better way to say it. I'm not sure why, but I feel like the way you worded it is negative. She shouldn't just be able to "hold down a job" she should thrive. Make sense?)


The most influential person in my life has been: This would probably be my grandfather. He was a family man. He loved his children and his grandchildren. He was always there for you and not ashamed to express his feelings to you. When the whole world didn't make sense he was always there and caring. He was a man of the highest integrity. He was intelligent. He was hard working. He was a real man. The kind of man I try to be every day of my life. I love him and I miss him but he couldn't have left a better impression on the world and my life personally. (I really like this section. You did a good job of giving specifics of what you appreciated about your grandfather. Juat fyi...someone pointed out to me that this profile should showcase you. So maybe say just a little less about him and a little more about how you are different because of him.)
The three things which I am most thankful for:

• All of the great relationships I have in my life with my family, friends and other great people.
• The opportunities I've received in life to be successful, have fun and enjoy life whenever possible.
• The simple pleasures so often taken for granted in life. Loving, laughing, food on the table, a warm bed, etc.

(I see this often, but if it's true it's true.)

Three of my best life-skills are:

• Using humor to make friends laugh
• Long-term personal planning
• Being a good friend and companion

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:

How insanely rich I am. Actually, forget about other people. I would settle for myself noticing it. Like maybe next payday. (I don't get it. Maybe that's just me.)


The things I can't live without are:

• My family and friends
• A fulfilling job
• Good music
• Football (Go Chiefs!)
• Books

(I like that you added the bit about the Chiefs...makes it more personal. The less generic the better.)


The first thing people notice about me:

I like to have fun. I know, weird right? A person who enjoys fun. But put me around my friends and we just have a good time. I don't care if people think we're a little strange at times. You only live once. Neither of us will remember the other one tomorrow. I'd rather be the one laughing. (Again, give me specifics or a story about something fun you did with your friends that will help explain this answer. Also...the part in bold makes no sense. What/who won't you remember tomorrow?


[B]Some additional information I want you to know:[/B You should probably know I sometimes travel for work. So if we're communicating and I don't answer for a week it doesn't necessarily mean I'm ignoring you. It might just mean I'm out of town and can't make it to a computer. If you want anymore information then contact me. I would just leave out the part I highlighted...it sounds like you are being more intentional about finding a relationship without it. Nit-picky, i know.)


My interests

I typically spend my leisure time: I love going out. A group of friends out at the bowling alley. Going to the lake for a campfire and maybe a round of fishing. Catching a concert.(None of these are complete sentences. It may not bother some people, but it would bother me.) In my time alone I like to read. I'm an avid reader. (These two sentences back to back seem redundant. Plus, since you're asked about reading in the next section, I would leave it out of this section completely.) A self-help book, a science book, an auto-biography, a history book, a good novel? Yes pleas (please). I also enjoy taking my motorcycle out for a ride on warm days. It has a backseat but I haven't found a passenger yet. (Great tid-bit at the end!)

The last book I read and enjoyed: I love reading and am always in the process of reading a book or two. My interests in literature vary wildly but at the time of this writing (I would say "as of right now")the last great book I read was"How To Really Stink At Work," by Jeff Foxworthy. I usually like heavier reads but I laughed until I cried. Great book. I'm also slowly working my way through a book of poems by C.S. Lewis. It's been pretty good so far.


According to my friends:

My friends describe me as:

• Good Listener
• Easy-Going
• Loyal
• Intelligent