JoshuaThree is offline JoshuaThree Post #1  February 7,2012, 2:36pm
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The One Thing I am passionate about:one thing I am most passi

I am most passionate about my career, traveling, and my family and friends, however, I would say that I am passionate about life in general because whatever I am doing, I am trying to do it as best as I possibly can.


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The Most Important Thing I am Looking For in a Person is:
important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Personality - being interesting, humorous, and conversational. Having fun and engaging conversations with someone is at the top of my list.

Basic Information:

Occupation:Attorney

Age:25

Height: 5' 8"

Wants Kids: Maybe

Kids at Home: No

Ethnicity: White, non-Hispanic

Religion: Christian

Drinks: About once a week

Smokes: Never

The most influential person in my life has been:

I highly value my close friendships and they are always an influential part of my life. "There are big ships and small ships, but the best ship of all is friendship."


The three things which I am most thankful for:

  • My family and friends
  • My educational background.
  • A challenging and fulfilling career.
Three of my best life-skills are:


  • Using humor to make friends laugh
  • Maintaining an organized life
  • Maintaining a network of close friends
The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:


I assume the best about everyone until they prove me wrong. I make friends very fast yet I do not take friendship lightly. If you are my friend, you have my 100% unflinching loyalty and support. My friends know that they can count on me whenever they need something. I've driven with a friend 12 hours round trip to pick up his girlfriend whose vehicle broke down. I like that I have a reputation for being dependable among my friends. I have been referred to as "the glue" for my maintaining of peace and harmony among my close group of friends.


The things I can't live without are:

  • Hibachi food.
  • My wonderful friends and family.
  • My Iphone and laptop.
  • Board Games
  • Wine.
The first thing people notice about me:


I always try to go out of my way to brighten somebody's day. You never know what someone is going through or dealing with at that very moment and a simple gesture can go a long way.


Some additional information I want you to know:


I love to travel. I find the U.S. national park system fascinating, and I visited thirteen of them this past year. I'm also a huge major league baseball fan and love to see new stadiums.


My interests


I typically spend my leisure time:


Reading, traveling, watching movies, and spending time with friends. I also like doing projects around the house. Since I was a kid, I've liked building things and working with my hands. I've recently built a coffee table and a hanging garden. When an appliance breaks, instead of calling a handyman, I force myself to learn how to repair it. I've taught myself how to repair refrigerators, garbage disposals and dishwashers, having fun and saving some cash in the process.


The last book I read and enjoyed:


The last book I read was "The Litigators" by John Grisham. I like legal fiction, but I mostly read non-fiction books; a find a wide variety of subjects interesting, from history to physics.


According to my friends:

My friends describe me as:
  • Funny
  • Loyal
  • Intelligent
  • Generous
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lrdittrich is offline lrdittrich Post #2  February 8,2012, 4:45am
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I am most passionate about my career, traveling, and my family and friends, however, I would say that I am passionate about life in general because whatever I am doing, I am trying to do it as best as I possibly can.

Hi! I'm a freelance editor, so I can't help but want to revise this to be more grammatical (plus I made some other suggested changes) : "I am most passionate about my career, traveling, and my family and friends; however, I could really say I am passionate about life in general because I put my whole self into whatever I do."

I would ditch the "no ships like friendships" quote -- a little corny

The section on "The one thing I wish more people would notice about me" -- it's a little long. I would cut it down a bit. In fact, I might even end it after "I do not take friendship lightly."

In leisure time, I would end with "I have taught myself how to repair it" and leave out the details about dishwashers, garbage disposals, etc. These details actually make you sound kind of boring or nerdy (in a DIY kind of way). It's good you are a handyman -- to talk about garbage disposals sounds a little off-putting.

Just my 2 cents! Keep in mind, though that I am not in your age bracket (I am in fact twice your age) -- not sure if that makes a difference or not!
 
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Thanks! That is some great advice, and I agree on all accounts. Amazing what a fresh set of eyes can do to a profile.
 
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