profile review m 23 please help

I have no idea what i am doing wrong. I been on this site for two years.



Occupation: Self-Employed
Age 23
Height 5'10
want kids yes
kids at home no
religion: christian
drinks: a few times a year
smokes: never
Ethnicity: white, non hispanic

What I am passionate about?
I love to travel and hope to see the whole world one day. WHY? THIS PASSION DOES NOT SAY MUCH ABOUT YOU, SO MANY PEOPLE ON DATING SITES SAY THEY LOVE TO TRAVEL.

What is the most important quality that you are looking for in another person?
I want someone who they DELETE THEY can like me for who I am an not someone else. THIS FIRST SENTENCE PROJECTS SOME NEGATIVITY, IT MAKES ME THINK YOU HAVE REJECTION ISSUES. PLEASE CONSIDER DELETING IT. Humor is a big plus, if we cant laugh at ourselves where would we find our laughter.

The Most influential person in my life has been?
My friend Jana, she is one of the funniest friends I meet on the Disney College Program.
She totally believes in my future career, and tells me to shoot for my dreams by giving me the confidence to do so.

The three things which I am thankful is
My job, I am thankful to have a steady income in an economic recession, have CHANGE HAVE FOR "WHILE" OR REWORK THE SENTENCE, THERE ARE SENTENCE STRUCTURE ISSUES HERE, WATCH YOUR GRAMMAR. I try to pay off my college loans


Three of my best life-skills are
The things I can’t live without are
Iphone
Ipod
Paper and pencil
Friends
family

The first thing people notice about me
How nice I am. THIS MAKES ME THINK YOU MAY SELF-ESTEEM ISSUES AS PEOPLE ARE NOT APPRECIATING YOU. THIS IS THE SECOND INSTANCE OF SOMETHING IN SUCH TENOR IN THIS PROFILE.

I typically spend my leisure time
Going to the movies to see what popular title is out. I love cooking and baking, and all my friends
I love it when I cook for them. CONSIDER DELETING THIS SENTENCE, YOU HAVE IT TWICE. I love working on puzzles like Sudoku trying to use my brain power
too think. If I have time, I catch up on some of y favorite tv series, and working out.
The last booked I read and enjoyed ?
My friends describe me as ?

any feed back is great guys thanks

Occupation: Self-Employed Put your field or actual profession /job..Self-employed is code for unemployed
Age 23 Put 18-25 for your preferences if you want matches sent to you
religion: christian Put "spiritual, not religious" for this and "any" , low preference for matches unless you want only ultra-Christian types,who also want only ultra-Christian types...very narrow chances with these settings

The Most influential person in my life has been?
This sounds like you are interested in this woman and want more than friends or already are / have been more than friends. Never put other women non-relatives on a pedestal like this, particularly when it exactly matches what you are looking for in someone.. Pick a mentor male friend relative anything but this.

My friend Jana, she is one of the funniest friends
She totally believes in my future career, and tells me to shoot for my dreams by giving me the confidence to do so.

My job, I am thankful to have a steady income in an economic recession, have I try to pay off my college loans Why advertise being broke and in debt?