Profile Review Male 23

What I'm Passionate About
During the week, my schedule can be busy. But when I have free time, I enjoy a thrilling adventure or furthering my knowledge through reading books and articles. LIfe isn't a tedious chore, it's an exciting and unpredictable journey of knowledge and opportunities. And unless you get out there and experience it, you're basically limiting yourself to a dull life. This is a lot of writing that boils to one answer - nothing. When you think of passionate about, maybe think really interested in. Reason you chose your career, a hobby that you love, a cause you would fight for or work for, etc. Pick something concrete to talk about and then explain why and how you got into it and what you get out of it.

Most Important Quality in another person
I strongly believe honnesty is the foundation of every successful relationship. I need someone who's not afraid to speak the truth whether it's about me or themself. Someone who can tell me what they want from life, the kind of person they're like, what they think about me etc...I have a lot of respect for people that are genuine and don't have to lie or pretend to impress other people.
It's well written and yet reads a bit like past relationship baggage because it's overstating the obvious. I mean have you ever heard anyone say that they would just love to find a good liar? When you over state the obvious, it reads like maybe you had issues with this you are not quite over yet.
Most Influential person in life
I've always deemed my grandfather as a role model since I was little. It was his character that I admired most of all. Even though grandpa was a very stubborn man, he was kind to everyone, displayed a high level of energy like no other man I knew, and loved to have a good time no matter what he was doing. This amazing man might have had some influence on the kind of person I am today.

First thing people notice about you
I have received many compliments on my very calm and easygoing vibe. I'm generally a very care free and laid back kind of guy. I don't like to get serious unless it's required.

The one thing you want people to notice about you
Don't let my calm, easygoing attitude fool you because I won't hesitate to get serious when the situation calls for it. I just wish more people would notice that. The section above and this one are repeating an identical thing. Can you think of some other aspect to talk about in either one of these sections?

Leisure time
I enjoy friendly, competitive sports among friends what kind?, reading a compelling fiction novel indoors on a cold breezy night what kind?, a hardcore workout at the local gymnasium to get the adrenaline pumping, blasting some heavy rock tunes, and expressing my knowledge or feelings with articles, essays and poetry. I'm also not afraid to try new things and I'm always willing to add new hobbies to my current collection.

I've been working diligently on my profile to make it the best it can possibly be. But I have no idea what a good profile is supposed to look like or how it's supposed to be written.