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tangochef is offline tangochef Post #11  January 27,2012, 6:43pm
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Ravenli68 wrote :
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The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:

I am quiet and shy until I get to know you.


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The first thing people notice about me:

People notice my sense of humor. I am funny and I love to laugh and make people laugh.


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The two above are mutually exclusive!!! You are quite and shy until you know me, but the first thing I notice about you is how gregarious you are because of your humor?

Also, the line about being quiet and shy at first is such an overused line that I think of it as a filler used by people who can't think of anything else.
 
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Ravenli68 is offline Ravenli68 Post #12  January 27,2012, 7:21pm
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More changes; thank you TangoChief.

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:


I am quiet, but quite capable of holding a conversation.

The first thing people notice about me:

I am laid back, quiet.
 
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smileygirl is offline smileygirl Post #13  January 28,2012, 6:48pm
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Raven,

I would change ti the other way, The One Thing I wish people would notice about me: I may come across quiet and shy, but I have a great sense of humor to share.

The fist thing people notice about me: Is my sense of humor.


Also, at 43, you say you want children, but you don't want anyone who already has children. You exclude a great number of men in your age group that already have children.

I would also not explain what you are grateful for, but just list: My family, my health, my job, etc. Over explaining is not necessary.
 
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Ravenli68 is offline Ravenli68 Post #14  January 28,2012, 8:49pm
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smileygirl wrote :
Raven,

I would change ti the other way, The One Thing I wish people would notice about me: I may come across quiet and shy, but I have a great sense of humor to share.

The fist thing people notice about me: Is my sense of humor

Also, at 43, you say you want children, but you don't want anyone who already has children. You exclude a great number of men in your age group that already have children.

I would also not explain what you are grateful for, but just list: My family, my health, my job, etc. Over explaining is not necessary.
Thank you for your input. I absolutely would accept a man who has children. I have it listed in my settings. No where in my profile does it say that I wouldn't accept a man with children, so I do not understand where you got the idea.
 
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