Profile Review Female 23 yrs. Thanks!

I was hoping you could look at my answers, and give me advice about how to improve my profile. Thanks!

The one thing I am most passionate about is:
I have a huge passion for children's literature. As a teacher, I am constantly looking for new children's books that are fun and exciting to read. Also, I love my job, where I am able to have an influence on my students' lives. I love it when a child learns something new, and it's like their brain goes "click," new information, and the child gets so excited about learning.
This is not too bad but to make it better I would suggest that you re-write it a bit so that you better blend your job with your passion for children's literature (the way it is written now you have two passions). I would also maybe make mention what grade you teach.

The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
I am looking for someone who will respect who I am and my values. But I also want a man who treats others with respect, and sees those around them as equals.
I would suggest a bit of a re-write here as well. The way you have it now you have two things you are looking for, but really the last sentence is part of your values. Leave the first sentence and then build on that by defining what some of your values are and how your match will exhibit these values.


The most influential person in my life has been:
My sister has been a big influence in my life. She doesn't realize it, but she has shown me how to be strong in tough situations. She has also shown me what it means to be a great listener, and a better friend.
This is good.

The three things which I am most thankful for:

• I am thankful for my family. They have been supportive and encouraging to me throughout the years.
• I am also thankful for my education. I love learning and finding new ways to improve myself, so that I can work harder to make a difference in other people's lives.
• Finally, I am thankful for my values. I have strong values in life that have helped lead me in making the right and positive decisions in my life.

This is good.

Three of my best life-skills are:

• Sharing my beliefs through teaching, participation, and example
• Maintaining a network of close friends
• Cooking for my family and friends

The things I can't live without are:

• My faith, which helps to keep me strong
• My family, who is there to support me
• Friends, who I have shared many goofy times with
• My cell phone, with all the games that I love
• My ipod, with my favorite playlists

This is the second time you have mentioned family.

The first thing people notice about me:
People notice that I am very optimistic, and have a positive outlook on life. Whenever my friends see something that is bright colored, they think of me, because I have a bright outlook on life. Even if something is going wrong, I am good at turning it around, and looking at the positive side of things.
You said the same thing three times and there are only three sentences

At your age men arent looking to get into a serious relationship and get married. That starts in their late 20s to mid 30s.

What did you say that for? I just finished paying for a 3 month membership

At your age its going to be difficult. .

Incorrect.....she has everyone from say 22 and up to choose from....