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I am passionate about doing the best that I can to in any given situation; I enjoy music, I often find myself just singing along; my true passion though is my family, my two girls mean the world to me This is kind of a jumble that really doesn't say anything. By the way, the fact that you deeply love your children is a given, claiming that as your passion is a bit odd. When you think about passion, think along the lines of what really interests you - your work, a hobby, a cause, a world issue that gets you fired up, etc. Pick one thing and talk about it - how did you get into it, what do you get out of it, why do you care, etc. Doesn't need to be long, just something concrete.


Someone who doesn't just play the card life deals them, someone that looks for more to life. Nice way to say ambitious.

In my own words
The most influential person in my life has been:
A lot of people have infuenced me through their actions, I have been blessed by meeting many great people who have taught me a lot. Personally, I'm fine with this answer, but a lot of people see this as a cop out. So, just pick a person. It doesn't have to be anything life changing. Maybe you have a friend with qualities you admire, maybe a teacher who got you to see something a different way, maybe you know someone who has faced serious adversities and came through on top and you admire their courage and strength, etc. Think of someone.


The three things which I am most thankful for:

I couldn't really just mention three, but I'll do my best, Im most thankful for friends, their love and support have helped me be a better person
Waking up to the most beautiful daughters
Working in tourism which has allowed me to meet great people and visit beautiful places in my own city
Three of my best life-skills are:
Finding creative solutions to everyday problems
Remaining calm yet resilient during a crisis
Being a good friend and companion

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
That behind my initial shyness I am very funny and out going
This is basically telling your dates that you'll be difficult to get to know and a boring date where they'll have to carry the conversation or face awkward silence. Who wants to deal with that? In your profile stick with what positive about you. Since you are in tourism, I'm certain you know how to be social and friendly with just about any stranger.
The things I can't live without are:
• My daughters
• Coffee
• A computer
• Laughter
• Books

Some additional information I want you to know:
I work very hard at my job and focus on my daughters, but I am looking for that extra fun to have with a partner, friend and lover. I love being spontaneous and adventurous and would love to meet someone that shares that same drive. Yet respect my responsibilities and values. This pretty much tells your prospective match to stay away because you won't have time for them. Everyone is busy nowadays, so there is no need to bring this up and rub it in. It just makes you seem unapproachable. Do mention here how many children you have and their ages. This info matters to people quite a bit.

My interests
I typically spend my leisure time:
I am focusing on training for my first 1/2 marathon rain or shine. I enjoy visiting attractions, going to a good movie or staying in. And well quite frankly housework and kids extra curricular are usually filling up my leisure time. Again with the I'm so busy and the kids. Delete all that and add in extra info. What kinds of attractions do you like to visit? What's next on your bucket list of attractions? What's your favorite? What kinds of movies do you like? What do you like to do when staying in? Cook? Read? Invite friends over for dinner? These details is what makes you less of a bland stranger and more of a vibrant person that stands out from the crowd.

The last book I read and enjoyed:
I am looking for my next read, not quite decided yet what I'm into this days... I have recently read an amazing true story called 'same kind of different as me'... very inspirational... Just pick a book you've read in the past and talk about it. What did you like about it? What was interesting or inspirational about it exactly to you? Don't be afraid to share some of your actual thoughts.

According to my friends:
My friends describe me as:
Happy
Intelligent
Hard Working
Outgoing

Ok, following the advice of our fellow members here is my eh profile,

Cheers



I am passionate about doing the best that I can to in any given situation; I enjoy music, I often find myself just singing along; my true passion though is my family, my two girls mean the world to me
Someone who doesn't just play the card life deals them, someone that looks for more to life.

I would either pick one thing that you feel very passionate about and give a few sentences explaining why, or give a list of things, each with a brief explanation. I would not mention your daughters in this section, as you mention them elsewhere.

In my own words
The most influential person in my life has been:
A lot of people have infuenced me through their actions, I have been blessed by meeting many great people who have taught me a lot.

I would pick one person, or at least provide examples of several people, with brief explanations of how they influenced you.

The three things which I am most thankful for:

I couldn't really just mention three, but I'll do my best, Im most thankful for friends, their love and support have helped me be a better person
Waking up to the most beautiful daughters
Working in tourism which has allowed me to meet great people and visit beautiful places in my own city

This is good. In fact, perhaps you can move the discussion about your work in tourism to the "most passionate" section and expand on it.

Three of my best life-skills are:
Finding creative solutions to everyday problems
Remaining calm yet resilient during a crisis
Being a good friend and companion

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
That behind my initial shyness I am very funny and out going

The things I can't live without are:
• My daughters
• Coffee
• A computer
• Laughter
• Books

Some additional information I want you to know:
I work very hard at my job and focus on my daughters, but I am looking for that extra fun to have with a partner, friend and lover. I love being spontaneous and adventurous and would love to meet someone that shares that same drive. Yet respect my responsibilities and values.

This is very good.

My interests
I typically spend my leisure time:
I am focusing on training for my first 1/2 marathon rain or shine. I enjoy visiting attractions, going to a good movie or staying in. And well quite frankly housework and kids extra curricular are usually filling up my leisure time.

As a divorced father, I certainly understand the time that kids and housework can consume. However, your mention of it in this section might scare off men who are not used to life in the trenches of parenthood. Maybe that's your goal...

The last book I read and enjoyed:
I am looking for my next read, not quite decided yet what I'm into this days... I have recently read an amazing true story called 'same kind of different as me'... very inspirational...

I would delete the first sentence, and expand your discussion of the book you read. Explain what it was about, and why you found it inspirational.

According to my friends:
My friends describe me as:
Happy
Intelligent
Hard Working
Outgoing


I posted some of my pics on my album

Thanks

I am passionate about doing the best that I can to in any given situation; I enjoy music, I often find myself just singing along; my true passion though is my family, my two girls mean the world to me
Someone who doesn't just play the card life deals them, someone that looks for more to life.

A lot of people have infuenced me through their actions, I have been blessed by meeting many great people who have taught me a lot.

I couldn't really just mention three, but I'll do my best, Im most thankful for friends, their love and support have helped me be a better person
Waking up to the most beautiful daughters
Working in tourism which has allowed me to meet great people and visit beautiful places in my own city

Finding creative solutions to everyday problems
Remaining calm yet resilient during a crisis
Being a good friend and companion

That behind my initial shyness I am very funny and out going

• My daughters
• Coffee
• A computer
• Laughter
• Books

I work very hard at my job and focus on my daughters,

I am focusing on training for my first 1/2 marathon rain or shine. I enjoy visiting attractions, going to a good movie or staying in. And well quite frankly housework and kids extra curricular are usually filling up my leisure time.

I am looking for my next read, not quite decided yet what I'm into this days... I have recently read an amazing true story called 'same kind of different as me'... very inspirational...

Happy
Intelligent
Hard Working
Outgoing

my two girls mean the world to me[/B]


... I love being spontaneous and adventurous and would love to meet someone that shares that same drive. Yet respect my responsibilities and values.

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