Profile review 29/M

I would appreciate any advice, constructive criticism, or comments on how my profile reads. Thanks for the help.

Other than your parents, who has been the most influential person in your life and why?
My uncles, they introduced me to football, guns, and dirt bikes... Kept me in line and gave me advice when I needed it. They always treated me like one of the guys.
You have a good start but I think there needs to be more detail. Such as are these your dad's brothers or your mom's brothers. How many uncles. What sort of advice did they provide.

What is the most important quality that you are looking for in another person?
I couldn't say that one quality is more important than another, but being smart, beautiful, and outgoing are definitely up there for me.
Needs more detail. Saying that you are looking for a match who is beautiful is going to be a turnoff to most of your matches.

Other than your appearance, what is the first thing that people notice about you?
That I am easy to talk to and can get along with just about anyone.
A bit generic and cliche.

What is the ONE thing that people DON'T notice about you right away that you WISH they WOULD?
I have a sensitive side.
This is also a bit generic. Tell me how you exhibit your sensitivity.

What are five things that you "can't live without?"
1.Family and Friends
2.SCUBA diving
3.Snow
4.Music
5.Laughter
Music and laughter are almost as generic as air and water.

Describe the last book that you read and enjoyed. What was it about? What did you like most about it?
Last Words by George Carlin It's an autobiography about the life of one of the greatest comedians to live. I love how George Carlin can find humor in all the aspects of life from birth to death.
You could make mention of some of the humorous things from the book.

What are you most passionate about?
I'd say my biggest passion has to be making sure that enjoy everyday, whether it's taking a trip to Lake Tahoe, diving in the ocean, riding dirt bikes in the desert, spending time with family or friends, kicking back on the couch watching football in my PJ's...
I read this and the first thing that pops in my mind is you are a high schooler whose goal in life it to party. While I am not in your target audience I am thinking that 29 year old women are going to be looking for guys who are a bit more focused and mature than someone whose goal is partying.

What are the THREE things for which you are MOST thankful?
1.Having family and friends that have supported me through all my decisions.
2.Who wouldn't want a job that they enjoy going to everyday? (You are supposed to be putting answers not questions.)
3.Adrenaline

How do you typically spend your leisure time?
Read, watch movies, listen to music.
So you spend your leisure time as a couch potato What happened to Lake Tahoe, SCUBA diving and riding a dirt bike?