Profile Review M/26

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The one thing I am most passionate about:
Living my life to fullest
This is too plain, vapid........think of some things that are important to you and why.
The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Down to earth. Someone that's comfortable in there own skin.
Again....This is too plain, vapid........think of some things that are important to you and why.
The most influential person in my life has been:
My grandparents. They were always there for me and taught me a lot.
Again..here....This is too plain, vapid........think of someone....a mentor, historical figure,etc... who is / was important to you and why.
The three things which I am most thankful for:
My family will always be there for me
I have friends that I care for that really care for me too
My dad
This is a section where you can use creativity to reveal a part of yourself that is witty ,interesting or unique...Again..here....This is too plain, vapid........think of things, besides the obvious (we all have friends / family)... that you are thankful for..and why.
The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
I'm not sure
Again..here....This is too plain, vapid........think of things, not this non-answer answer...would be best to fill this out when you have time and can put some thought beyond bland one-liners into it.
The things I can't live without are:
My family
This is too plain, vapid........think of things, besides the obvious (we all have friends / family)
Zune - I love music
Friends
This is too plain, vapid........think of things, besides the obvious (we all have friends / family)
Internet
Food - you gotta eat lol
The first thing people notice about me:
I'm a generally positive person
This is too plain, vapid........think of things, besides the obvious
Some additional information I want you to know:
I love music, all kinds of music, R&B, rap, rock, my philosophy is 'as long as it songs good I'll listen to it' with that being said I don't listen to much country lol.This is too plain, vapid........think of things, besides just music
I typically spend my leisure time:
Watching TV shows/movies, playing video games, watching sports, reading/audio books
This is too plain, vapid........think of things, besides TV, music, video games, books...these are not things women are going to beat your door down to join you in..
The last book I read and enjoyed:
A game of thrones series.Why...elaborate so women can at least relate to this somewhat.

Please review my profile, let know what's good/ok about it and what needs work(removed, added, re-worded etc) and If you would be interested if you saw this profile why or why not. Thanks, I'm really trying to improve my profile and put my best foot forward.




The one thing I am most passionate about:
Living my life to fullest
No! No! No!
This is cliche, it says nothing about YOU. Tell me about the one thing that YOU are most passionate about. Define it, explain it, tell me why you are passionate about it. Make me believe that it is a passion.

The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Down to earth. Someone that's comfortable in there own skin.
Very generic. Explain what this means to you, how your match will demonstrate that she is "down to earth".


The most influential person in my life has been:
My grandparents. They were always there for me and taught me a lot.
Tell me about how your grandparents were there for you, what you learned from them.

The three things which I am most thankful for:
My family will always be there for me
I have friends that I care for that really care for me too
My dad (Is your dad not part of your family???)

Three of my best life-skills are:
Using humor to make friends laugh
Remaining calm yet resilient during a crisis
Being a good friend and companion

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
I'm not sure
You need to find some trait that you have that people don't notice about you. Ask friends, family, co-workers.

The things I can't live without are:

My family
Zune - I love music
Friends
Internet
Food - you gotta eat LOL

The first thing people notice about me:
I'm a generally positive person
This can be worded better. Also describe how you exhibit your positive attitude.

Some additional information I want you to know:
I love music, all kinds of music, R&B, rap, rock, my philosophy is 'as long as it sounds good I'll listen to it' with that being said I don't listen to much country LOL
This could be written better.

My interests
I typically spend my leisure time:
Watching TV shows/movies, playing video games, watching sports, reading/audio books
So you are a solitary couch potato? What is your match going to do WITH you?

The last book I read and enjoyed:
A game of thrones series.
What is this series of books about? Why do you like it? We're back in school here I want a book report.

According to my friends:
My friends describe me as:
Funny
Happy
Good Listener
Caring