Profile review 25 male

Hi,
All my pictures are just myself wearing casual clothes with two body shots and a close up with an eagle on my shoulder (That shouldn't be a turn off right?)

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:

That I can be very outgoing


The first thing people notice about me:

Can be easy to get along with.


Some additional information I want you to know:

Ask me anything you would like to know

I typically spend my leisure time:

Exercising (running or playing badminton), reading, or hang out with my friends

Hi,

New to this but many of my friends suggested I try online dating and so far e-harmony seems to be okay to start off with. I've had it for about 2 weeks and was wondering if I could get a review of my profile to make it look better? So far I've only had one GC but she closed me right after the 3rd set of questions. I've sent 1st GC questions to at least a dozen matches and so far NONE of them have responded. I check and they are still "active today or yesterday" and they have viewed but still no response. I even nudged them and they still don't respond at all! All my pictures are just myself wearing casual clothes with two body shots and a close up with an eagle on my shoulder (That shouldn't be a turn off right?)

The one thing I am most passionate about:
I am most passionate about both my family and my friends who support me through life and vice versa. I love to travel to different places around the world to see the different types of people and perspectives there are. Passionate about your family and friends is kind of an odd answer. You may love them, care about them, etc. but passionate is the wrong word for that. When answering this question think more along the lines of what truly interests you in life - a hobby, a particular cause, your job, something else - then explain what about it that interests you. How did you get into it? Etc.


The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Someone who is close with her family, easy-going and good at balancing things in life! I am also looking for someone with a sense of adventure and loves to go outdoors to the mountains. So if she has never gone hiking in the mountains is that a deal breaker for you? These kinds of very specific statements are likely spook potential matches from responding because they'll think "well I don't go hiking/camping every weekend so this guy is not for me." That's silly and not what makes or breaks relationships, but it sure stops you from getting dates.

Basic Information

Occupation:Teacher and Realtor
Age25
Height5' 6"(167 cm)
Wants Kids:Yes
Kids at Home:No
EthnicityChinese
Religion:Christian
Drinks:A few times a year
Smokes:Never

The most influential person in my life has been:

My mentor teachers who taught me how to organize and to lead others in teaching.
The three things which I am most thankful for:

• Having a dependable and close family
• Good health
• Reliable friends who I can count on

Three of my best life-skills are:

• Understanding local, national, and world events
• Long-term personal planning
• Continuing to expand my knowledge and awareness

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:

That I can be very outgoing If you are outgoing people will instantly notice that. Rethink this answer and what the question is asking.This is can be your opportunity to insert some humor and share something funny or quirky about yourself.


The first thing people notice about me:

Can be easy to get along with. Say "I am easy to get along with" instead of "can".


Some additional information I want you to know:

Ask me anything you would like to know This is the kind of non answer best left out. I don't know you and have zero interest to ask anything. So, either leave this blank or be a little creative. You can insert a funny story here about yourself or add some other interesting information here that doesn't go anywhere else. For instance, you have a weakness for chocolate ice cream....

I typically spend my leisure time:

Exercising (running or playing badminton) explain more - do you compete, do you play on a league or a team or just for fun?, reading, what kinds of books? or hang out with my friends hang out with friends doing what? Tell me something about yourself and what you do with your free time. Tell me what makes you YOU as opposed to just another anonymous profile in my in-box that reads much like all the others.

The last book I read and enjoyed:

Wolf of the Plains. Story of Genghis Khan. I enjoyed reading it as it talked about how a young boy who was exiled had to start from scratch to become the most powerful man in the world

My friends describe me as:

• Physically Fit
• Good Listener
• Intelligent
• Hard Working

The one thing I am most passionate about:
I'd put issues that are important to you here. And for the bit about traveling, list all the places you've been. Specifics.
I am most passionate about both my family and my friends who support me through life and vice versa. I love to travel to different places around the world to see the different types of people and perspectives there are.


The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Nice, but these could be two different people. The easy going one, and the adventure girl. One is lower energy and the other is higher energy. I'd pick one and describe her.
Someone who is close with her family, easy-going and good at balancing things in life! I am also looking for someone with a sense of adventure and loves to go outdoors to the mountains.

Basic Information
You sound very solid and mature at your age. That's an amazing advantage.
Occupation:Teacher and Realtor
Age25
Height5' 6"(167 cm)
Wants Kids:Yes
Kids at Home:No
EthnicityChinese
Religion:Christian
Drinks:A few times a year
Smokes:Never

The most influential person in my life has been:
I'd reword this sentence. The grammar seems a tad off and that makes it a little unclear. If you want me to take a crack at it, just ask.
My mentor teachers who taught me how to organize and to lead others in teaching.
The three things which I am most thankful for:
Good list! But like I said in another critique, maybe add something silly at the end.

• Having a dependable and close family
• Good health
• Reliable friends who I can count on

Three of my best life-skills are:
Fab. Be even more specific if you can.

• Understanding local, national, and world events
• Long-term personal planning
• Continuing to expand my knowledge and awareness

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
I'd make a joke here. Something like "I wish more people would notice what a genius I am. How incredibly hilarious my jokes are. And how truly humble all these blessings have made me."
That I can be very outgoing


The first thing people notice about me:

Take out the "Can be." It implies that sometimes you aren't.

Can be easy to get along with.


Some additional information I want you to know:
I'd put odd trivia about you here. A weird collection you had as a kid. An obscure award you won. Anything a potential date can tease you about.
Ask me anything you would like to know

I typically spend my leisure time:
I'd add, "But I'd much rather spend some of it cuddled up in front of a bonfire with a great girl." or something to that effect.
Exercising (running or playing badminton), reading, or hang out with my friends

The last book I read and enjoyed:
If this is a great example of the stuff you like to read and it says something about your personality, cool. Just saying, I don't think you have to actually put in the last book you've read. It could be anything you've read recently and enjoyed.
Wolf of the Plains. Story of Genghis Khan. I enjoyed reading it as it talked about how a young boy who was exiled had to start from scratch to become the most powerful man in the world

My friends describe me as:
Maybe end the list with "In need of a good girlfriend to rock my far too serious world."

• Physically Fit
• Good Listener
• Intelligent
• Hard Working

Not sure of your marching settings...but most women at your age still tend to want to date older men...be prepared for that.