Profile Review for 24 year old Female

The one thing I am most passionate about:
I have a great family that I love spending time with, and friends that keep me smiling. I love animals, especially dogs and I have a puppy named Bella. I'm going to college for teaching, but my dream is to be an author. In fact I'm thinking seriously about writing my own novel this year.


I would pick one thing, and stick to that theme. This is just a rambling list.

For me, your current occupation and education would be the best choice - since it's actually happening.

I'd put the "author" part later on.

"Thinking seriously" about writing? Either start it or don't, but I wouldn't put this unless it's underway (since it can be started at any time), unlike, say, quitting one's job to become a full-time novelist.


The most important thing I am looking for in a person:
I'm looking for a guy who is genuine and has a good heart. Someone that will hold my hand through good times and bad, be my best friend, the one I run to. A guy who is honest and has morals, who takes life seriously but also knows how to have fun.


Too vague and a rambling list again.

I would not look for "honest" - or anything else that my be assumed in healthy people.

I have "morals" - since they may not be yours, I'd define such a request.


The most important person in my life has been:
My Aunt, she has always been a second mother to me. I can tell her things I can't tell my parents. She understands me and we are very similar emotionally. Also my Grandfather because he believes in me even when I don't believe in myself, and he's done a lot for me since I was born. They are both very important people in my life.


Why? How are you a better person due to her? (Her, like the question, is for one.) This is a question I rarely care about the answer, so not a big deal.


The 3 things I am most thankful for:

-My family & friends
-My health
-My job

The one thing I wish more people would notice about me:

I'm like an onion, there's many layers to me.


If you're going to start this way, you have to make us laugh or tell us something interesting - or at least write something well ... it doesn't work at all to say "author" and then answer like that.


The things I can't live without are:

-love
-music
-books
-laughter
-mayonnaise

The first thing people notice about me:

Hmmm well its either that I'm so pale...even though I am Italian lol, or that I have a few tattoos.

Some additional info I want you to know:

Never thought I would join an online dating site, but I just don't seem to meet many guys in the regular ways. I work with mostly all women and I don't really go to bars/clubs so its hard to meet someone nice. Though there are some awesome people in my life(family/friends), at times I still feel alone. Its hard when everyone comes to you for everything, and you have no one to go to...


You were never as perfect as people told you, either, or whatever - as is now becoming clear. Don't denigrate online dating in an online dating profile (duh)!


I typically spend my leisure time:
Going to movies, eating out, rollerskating, cooking(especially baking), reading, writing poetry, laughing and having fun. I would love to meet someone that could broaden my horizons a bit, get me to try new things and visit new places.

As blunt as that may have been, thank you. I asked for constructive criticism and you delivered. I don't want my profile to come across as morose and I certainly am not looking for someone to rescue me from my life. I will take your thoughts and apply them a bit, so again thank you.