Profile review - 34 / Female

Here is my profile in a nutshell.... I am sure it needs a LOT of tweaking, so have it! Thanks for the help

--Profile--

The one thing I am most passionate about:
Experience, whether it be a great book, an interesting movie, a fantastic new restaurant, an amazing trip, or a great day with my family or friends, there is nothing like finding joy in the things that I love. (This definitely includes my love of the Red Sox and Patriots as well)

Passionate is why you chose your career, a hobby you love and would never give up, a cause that interests you, a place you regularly volumteer at. These items you said here can be placed elsewhere under more info.


The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Someone who embraces life and wants to see what the world has to offer. This is cliche seen it 10,000 times.... And a sense of humor, that is also a must. And stability....ok now I am sounding like Steve Martin in "The Jerk"....this ashtray and this chair are all I need.....and my dog. This part here makes no sense whatsoever. remove it.

About Me
Basic Information
Occupation: Corporate Education & Training
Age 34
Height 5' 4"
Wants Kids: Maybe
Kids at Home: No
Ethnicity White, non-Hispanic
Religion: Spiritual, but not religious
Drinks: About once a week
Smokes: Never
In my own words:
The most influential person in my life has been:
My Memere, my mother's mom. She was the greatest, sweetest, most loving person in the world. From her I learned how to be patient and how to love unconditionally. I have confidence and believe in myself because of how much she loved me and how proud she was of me.
The three things which I am most thankful for:
•The love & closeness of my family
•My amazing friends
•My sense of humor & intelligence

Three of my best life-skills are:
•Finding creative solutions to everyday problems
•Using humor to make friends laugh
•Being a good friend and companion

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
I tend to be a bit quiet around new people, this is honestly not due to shyness. I like to size up a situation before I jump into it. I wish people would realize that I am really a very adventurous person who is always willing to try new things.


If you are adventurous and willing to try new things then share a story in your profile about one such example.
The things I can't live without are:
My family
My iPhone
Humor
A good book (my ereader)
Cards & games

The first thing people notice about me:
I like to hope that they notice my sharp wit and intelligence.
My interests
I typically spend my leisure time:

Going for walks, especially in the woods or on the beach during an off season. Playing games & spending time with family and friends, reading, watching movies & tv, cooking, running around with my nephews or cheering them on at their various sporting events.

You seem to have a busy live....You have room for a guy???

The last book I read and enjoyed:
I think the last book I read that I got really involved in was Stephen King's "Under the Dome". I had a run of bad books before that, but I know that King's stories are always guaranteed to be good. Since I read at a pace of about a book a week, I end up running into duds a lot. I find his characters are always interesting and I get really involved in their story. Some of my other favorite authors includ Douglas Adams, LM Montgomery, Rosamunde Pilcher, Vonnegut...Wait, was the correct answer "War & Peace"?

According to my friends:
My friends describe me as:
Funny
Passionate
Thoughtful
Intelligent
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I know that the reading thing can be off-putting but I love to read and I do read a lot so I don't want to hide that....and I know it looks like I spend a lot of time sitting around, but honestly I don't, I am just not the gym rat type. However, I would love some advice and would like to "finesse" my profile to be more intriguing, but I don't want to be misrepresented....

Here is my profile in a nutshell.... I am sure it needs a LOT of tweaking, so have it! Thanks for the help

--Profile--

The one thing I am most passionate about:
Experience, whether it be a great book, an interesting movie, a fantastic new restaurant, an amazing trip, or a great day with my family or friends, there is nothing like finding joy in the things that I love. (This definitely includes my love of the Red Sox and Patriots as well)

For a laundry list answer, this is not bad.

The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Someone who embraces life and wants to see what the world has to offer. And a sense of humor, that is also a must. And stability....ok now I am sounding like Steve Martin in "The Jerk"....this ashtray and this chair are all I need.....and my dog.

I got the joke and lol'd. The first sentence is meh.


About Me
Basic Information
Occupation: Corporate Education & Training
Age 34
Height 5' 4"
Wants Kids: Maybe
Kids at Home: No
Ethnicity White, non-Hispanic
Religion: Spiritual, but not religious
Drinks: About once a week
Smokes: Never
In my own words:
The most influential person in my life has been:
My Memere, my mother's mom. She was the greatest, sweetest, most loving person in the world. From her I learned how to be patient and how to love unconditionally. I have confidence and believe in myself because of how much she loved me and how proud she was of me.
The three things which I am most thankful for:
•The love & closeness of my family
•My amazing friends
•My sense of humor & intelligence

Three of my best life-skills are:
•Finding creative solutions to everyday problems
•Using humor to make friends laugh
•Being a good friend and companion

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:
I tend to be a bit quiet around new people, this is honestly not due to shyness. I like to size up a situation before I jump into it. I wish people would realize that I am really a very adventurous person who is always willing to try new things.

How about: I'm not shy; I am just waiting to ambush people. Ok, not quite, but see if you can fix that a bit with some humor.

Agree if you are going to say adventure you better either post some pics proving it up or tell the reader what that means to you. IE is adventure sky diving or eating hot sauce....

The things I can't live without are:
My family
My iPhone
Humor
A good book (my ereader) More specific
Cards & games More specific....eg worlds of warcraft or pinochle....?

The first thing people notice about me:
I like to hope that they notice my sharp wit and intelligence.
My interests
I typically spend my leisure time:

Going for walks, especially in the woods or on the beach during an off season. Playing games & spending time with family and friends, reading, watching movies & tv, cooking, running around with my nephews or cheering them on at their various sporting events. ADD EXAMPLES. Cooking Thai, playing Risk and watching Hot Tub Time machine or Cooking tofu burgers, playing canasta and watching bambi?

The last book I read and enjoyed:
I think the last book I read that I got really involved in was Stephen King's "Under the Dome". I had a run of bad books before that, but I know that King's stories are always guaranteed to be good. Since I read at a pace of about a book a week, I end up running into duds a lot. I find his characters are always interesting and I get really involved in their story. Some of my other favorite authors includ Douglas Adams, LM Montgomery, Rosamunde Pilcher, Vonnegut...Wait, was the correct answer "War & Peace"?

According to my friends:
My friends describe me as:
Funny
Passionate
Thoughtful
Intelligent
__________________________________________________

I know that the reading thing can be off-putting but I love to read and I do read a lot so I don't want to hide that....and I know it looks like I spend a lot of time sitting around, but honestly I don't, I am just not the gym rat type. However, I would love some advice and would like to "finesse" my profile to be more intriguing, but I don't want to be misrepresented....