pedalfaster is offline pedalfaster Post #1  February 2,2011, 8:06am
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The one thing I am most passionate about:

Cycling and camping are two of my favorite activities. I'm also a regular in the yoga classes at the gym. I like to take one or two big trips a year. This year it was Yellowstone National Park and Port Aransas. I love the mountains and the beach. I love learning new things, so I listen to National Public Radio every day.

The most influential person in my life has been:

A former boss who's now a good friend. I can always count on him to give me good advice. We're very different but it's good to get a different point of view on things.

The three things which I am most thankful for:

My friends
My job
My iPhone

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:

When I meet people in a group, I'm usually pretty reserved. My sense of humor doesn't always come through.

The things I can't live without are:

Internet
TV
Car
Pocket Knife
Bicycle

Some additional information I want you to know:

I'm an awesome Rockband frontman!

I typically spend my leisure time:

I'm on my bike a few times a week, although it's been too cold lately. I ride to the grocery store, library, and other places. Once it warms up, I'm going to start riding with a club. I also like watching TV and movies or reading a good book.

The last book I read and enjoyed:

I really liked the book Packing for Mars. I thought I knew a lot about living in space. I didn't know anything! I had no idea how hard it is to eat, sleep, and do everyday tasks up there.
 
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pedalfaster wrote :
Thanks for reviewing my profile.

The one thing I am most passionate about:

Cycling and camping are two of my favorite activities. I'm also a regular in the yoga classes at the gym. I like to take one or two big trips a year. This year it was Yellowstone National Park and Port Aransas. I love the mountains and the beach. I love learning new things, so I listen to National Public Radio every day. This reads like a nice leisure activity list rather than a passionate about section. Pick something you really love, like cycling and tells us more about it. What do you get out of it? How did you get involved? What attracts you to it?

The most influential person in my life has been:

A former boss who's now a good friend. I can always count on him to give me good advice. We're very different but it's good to get a different point of view on things.

The three things which I am most thankful for:

My friends
My job
My iPhone

The one thing I wish MORE people would notice about me:

When I meet people in a group, I'm usually pretty reserved. My sense of humor doesn't always come through. This is just a variation of "I'm shy" thing and is the ultimate cliche that appears in just about every other profile. This will not inspire your matches to want to meet you. All this tells a potential match is that a date with you is likely to be painful where she carries the conversation because you are too reserved, shy, etc. This section is a good opportunity to showcase your humor or say something fun, positive, or quirky about yourself. In other words show some color.

The things I can't live without are:

Internet
TV
Car
Pocket Knife
Bicycle

Some additional information I want you to know:

I'm an awesome Rockband frontman! lol! and it's a good kind of lol

I typically spend my leisure time:

I'm on my bike a few times a week, although it's been too cold lately. I ride to the grocery store, library, and other places. Once it warms up, I'm going to start riding with a club. I also like watching TV and movies or reading a good book. Your passionate about section would fit in here nicely. Also, if you already mentioned a hobby in one place, don't mention it again since it can make you seem a bit one dimensional. So if you talk about cycling in your passionate section, talk about everything else you do here.

The last book I read and enjoyed:

I really liked the book Packing for Mars. I thought I knew a lot about living in space. I didn't know anything! I had no idea how hard it is to eat, sleep, and do everyday tasks up there.
My comments above. Overall it's a nice profile, just needs a few little tweaks. Keep in mind that I'm only commenting on how your profile reads and not on you as a person.
 
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