Profile Help Please :)

The one thing I am most passionate about:
God, family, friends, painting, loud music and singing off tune, dancing crazy, laughing till you cry, moments that I will never forget, college, America, tattoos, happy people, kids, happiness, butterflies, and great big bear hugs, anything that has a motor and goes fast, snow, lights love anything that is bright, chocolate, pineapples, big smiles, and people with big hearts.
These are all great.. but seriously you are not passionate about every single thing here.. Pick one or two and tell us about them and why they are passionate.. less is more.

The most important thing I am looking for in a person is:
Someone with a good heart, who can enjoy, who can have fun, be serious, and at the end of the day loves life.
Not great... you might want to look at the profile workshops (top of the forum) to get some ideas..

The most influential person in my life has been:
My family!!! I am so blessed because my family is mostly all military and because of that they have taught me loyality, how to work for what you want, how to love with all your heart, and how important the small things are in life. The best role models and people you could ever meet..
This is okay.. could rewrite to make it flow better.. lose the extra !!!!

The three thing which I am most thankful for:
Faith, because it will always get you through life and bring you joy and all the happiness in the world.
-Family, they will always be the ones who you can count on.
-Friends, they are the family you choose in life and who are a reflection of you.
My faith, it will always get ME through life.. and bring ME joy.. This is about YOU not about Me...


The one thing I wish more people would notice about me:
I wish people would understand behind the humor I am really not that tough. Although I seem organized don’t open my closet!!!! That although I am talkitive and a good listener I don't open myself up to just anyone. I may seem like I have my life figured out but all honestly I kind of just go with the flow. I am completely random and wouldn't change that for the world!
Please rethink this answer.. this makes me think you are unstable and could go postal at the drop of a hat.. it doesn't come across the way you think it does..
The first sentence doesn't make sense to me.. humor and tough? do you mean sarcastic? humor = funny..

The first thing people notice about me:
My kind personality, how I have a sweet voice but a kick butt attitude, how everything is always on the brightside and how I can turn any normal day thing into a funny story.
okay could use some rearranging..

Some additional information I want you to know:
I love life and I want someone to enjoy that with I want that person that completes my life
dump this answer.. tell me something that isn't cliche or from a movie!

I typically spend my leisure time:
Because I work two jobs and I am a full time student I make sure my fun time is amazing, I love good movies, bon fires, totaly head over heals for winter and snow!!! When I get the chance I enjoy going home and catching up and spending time with friends who are near and dear to me and with my family either cooking, or on the back of my dad’s bike. I love to paint (although not very good) the music is always on and I sing even though it’s off key and I love to dance because it makes the soul feel good! I still get excited when I get to try new things, I love road trips, and to travel want to see the world.
Some of this is repetitive from above..also some of this could be used in the the answer above..( painting, danving and travel)
not sure why you start every sentence with because?
Again with the laundry lists.. give less- tell more..

The last book I read and enjoyed:
Mostly just my text books for school, the faster I read them the closer I am to graduation!!!
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