Profile Review Please

Definitely get a new photo. This is an obviously self taken photo and we can't really see your face. Have a friend help you. BTW, this isn't a bad photo, but shouldn't be used as your main photo.



You described your leisure time, not really passions. Pick one or two things and really describe that. Do you also collect the books you read? It seems Fantasy, possibly Sci Fi to a lesser degree are your passions.



Please make this a full sentence at least.



First, you have a typo. "Alot" is not one word. Second, you have a lot of room to tell something more. This is quite vague.

These are ok. Seen them a million times, but ok.



Typos. Please use a spell check and all "I"s should be capitalized. This also seems quite negative. You need to look at this from another angle and give something positive about yourself.




Too generic. Are you always smiling, is this how they would notice this?



Eh, I'm not inclined to like this, without something else. I had a match list that he had to each his food separately, they couldn't touch on his plate, etc. It was totally out there, but obviously memorable. There has to be more to you than anime, fantasy books and movies.



This is OK, but I can guarantee you, practically no woman is interested in someone that has no "outside" interests. Do you do anything besides keep yourself glued to a computer, TV or fantasy book?



Good.


You seem quite one dimensional. Do you ever go outside your home besides to work? I'm not saying you need to pretend to like jogging or some other activity you don't actually do, but you seem pretty single minded. Are you part of a role playing group or do you do the medieval fairs for your role playing? It just seems like you live a life inside your home, and that's it. Give your match something else about you.

Every comment had a negative portion! Every one! Even the book one was 'good' then a whole paragraph of criticism. I called it scathing hate because it made me feel horrible.

if we tell you your profile is perfect and you are awesome, you'll just start a thread in 6 months complaining how all the girls on EH closed you.

FWIW- EH does not have a lot of early 20 somethings. don't take it so hard.

I know, i dont want to be told that it's perfect, i want to know how to make improvements, but for god's sake, i was hoping for something a little more positive in the way of how to improve instead of the 'backhanded compliment' style of improvement suggestions. "Ok, seen it a million times before, but ok" - hardly positive.

And truthfully, knowing that eH has few early 20 somethings is, well, a bit disheartening - it means that they already know how to do all this and have relationships or know how to look for them with somewhat successful results.

And btw, what does FWIW stand for?

Sorry about all this, but being called 'one dimensional' made me feel like any interest i might be to a girl my age dropped to 0.

Andie gave you specific, constructive comments. Read some of the other threads on profile reviews to get other ideas to expand on Andie's suggestions. For example, WHY do you like amine? What about it captures your attention? If a girl had "I like amine" in her profile, my interest would not be peaked. Why? Because I don't 'get' amine. yet it she said something like she enjoys amine as it releases her inner superhero, I'd be very intrigued.

FWIW means for what it's worth. and, stop being a victim. Andie gave you criticism on your profile, not on you the Person.

now, I skimmed your other thread.

you need to get out into the world. there are anime conventions- go there, you will meet tons of girls with the same interests.

I meet tons of people at SciFi Cons and HorrorCons- cool people too. and the best part is the girls there appreciate a guy who doesn't think they are weird for their interests.