Profile review before a third tune-up

The one thing is most passionate about:
Languages. Through them, I discover their culture, their society and history, how their people evolved. By finding similarities between them, I see how populations influenced each other. Lastly, learning a foreing language feels like cracking a code that unravels a whole new aspect of the world we all live in. "foreign" - the "n" and the "g" are inverted here. Otherwise, I like this.

The most important thing is looking for in a person is:
Someone looking for a true engagement, a woman who knows where she is, and where she wants her life to go. Someone for whom sampling and tasting around random dates is behind her, and whose next step is to build a healthy family, nurtured with mutual love and equality. Someone who can listen to the needs of others, yet aware of her own. I think this is well said.

Basic Information
Occupation: Programmer/Analyst (Video Games)
Age: 28
Height: 6' 2"
Wants Kids: Yes
Kids at Home: No
Ethnicity: White, non-Hispanic
Religion: Christian
Drinks: About once a week
Smokes: Never

The most influential person in 's life has been:
My babysitter. I have a memory of a pixelated dog running across a computer monitor. That's where I realized people like you and I could create and fashion video games, that they weren't just magic boxes only wizards could understand. That ordinary dog started my carreer. I like the uniqueness here; I'm not sure I understand the connection between the babysitter and the pixelated dog -- did your babysitter create the dog image?

The three things which is most thankful for:
* Having a stable familial background.
* Finances healthy enough to have a house and live away from need.
* Starting my professional life in the one domain I was aiming for.
Again, I think this is unique and clear.

Three of 's best life-skills are:
* Continuing to expand my knowledge and awareness
* Using humour to make friends laugh
* Remaining calm yet resilient during a crisis

The one thing wishes MORE people would notice about him is:
I'm a very loyal and devoted person, I'm a good listener and will give you the advices you request to the best of my knowledge. My trust is easy to earn, and hard to lose. Nice. You may want to say "advice" instead of "advices" -- it may sound more natural to most of your readers.

The things can't live without are:
* A computer, of any form.
* Wikipedia
* Nature
* Music, my music (maybe describe, or do the "Something to Talk About" feature)
* Humour. Can't live and not laugh. (It may help to engage matches by cracking a joke here instead of saying you like to laugh -- just an idea).

The first thing people notice about is:
I'm a very shy and reserved man. I prefer to listen and analyse, and speak up when asked for my advice. Discussion for me is usually more functionnal than emotional. My body language and my physical affection are my vessel of choice to convey my intimacy. "functional" has one "n". Personally, I'm not sure the speech vs. body language information adds anything; it may come across as negative to some matches or be misunderstood. But that is only my opinion -- see what others say.

Some additional information wanted you to know is:
Le Francais est ma langue maternelle. I like to write, and I get carried away easily while composing. Be prepared for some architectural and sculptural walls of text! I really like this one. Nice.

typically spends his leisure time:
If there's some household chore that still needs to be done, I'll try to give it a priority over leisure. I like to go cycling or walking, where I can set aside the stress of the day and let my thoughts wander on everything else. When I'm too tired, or not willing to do exercise, I sit back and read or watch tv. The latter is more common, as I read through books quickly and run out of material often. I think this gives a good sense of "what it would be like to be with you." So I like it.

The last book read and enjoyed:
Gunnm Last Order (graphics novel.) The author depicts a dystopian world with such mastery. I know this isn't exactly a welcoming type of reading, but I really love stories that will divert from the classical frame of a righteous hero struggling against an obvious evil. When frontiers become blurry, and both sides of the fence appear justifiable, the moral struggle absorbs my mind into the depths of the book. Personally, I think this is nice and gives more information about you and your interests.

's friends describe him as:
* Dependable
* Rational
* Quiet
* Intelligent

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Thank you for your time and input!

Thanks for the advice so far, Kate. I'll take that into account and reword some things.

About the Five things one can't live without, however: isn't the input length very restricted on that? I recall entering a short explanation on each line and being denied because it was too long, so I ended up just putting the things bare. So a joke on that humour line might just not fit.