Review profile -vlmnash

Hi, I am new to eHarmony (less than a month). I am a 54 year old female, single, never married, no kids. I have been tweaking and tweaking my profile. I would appreciate comments and suggestions for improving it. I am especially interested in hearing from men on their read of my profile, but gladly would like female input as well. Thanks.

1. The one thing you are most passionate about:
I am a sports enthusiast (Predators, Titans, Braves and NASCAR). I enjoy a wide-range of activities from hockey to classical music.
Your new version of this is much better. This was just far too bland. This should be thought of as the introductory hook. One thing you could tell them that would make them want to know more.

2. What is the most important quality that you are looking for in another person?
Someone who enjoys life - from sporting events, to a variety of concerts, to a nice dinner out, or simply hanging around the house. I am looking for the person who is comfortable with himself, whether it is being alone, being with me, being with group of friends, or being around total strangers.
I liked this and thought it was OK as is. Gives me an idea if I would like the same things as you and if I would enjoy the time I spend with you.

3. Other than your parents, who has been the most influential person in your life and why?
An English teacher from Jr High. He really allowed me to think outside the box, encouraged my writing ability and simply allowed me to grow as a person. Several years ago I met him again and told him about his influence on me.
The last sentence seems superfluous to me. It doesn't reveal anything about you really.

4. Other than your appearance, what is the first thing that people notice about you?
I'm a good listener and conversationalist. I am versed on a variety of topics, and always enjoy learning new things.
seems fine to me

5. What is the ONE thing that people DON'T notice about you right away that you WISH they WOULD?
How easy I adapt to a variety of situations. I am just as comfortable in formal settings as I am in casual settings. What can I say, I like fine wine, cold beer, and room temperature water.
I would leave off the I like fine wine etc. It just sounds ... pretentious and like you're fishing for someone with money perhaps. Also ... I don't think it really works here to claim a character trait that somehow people don't notice about you, bc if you were indeed that thing people would notice it. I think of this section as one memorable thing about you that people won't notice immediately ... for mine I put that underneath my curly head of hair and goofy grin there lurks a science geek.
6. What are five things you “can’t live without?”
1. Family
2. Friends
3. Sporting events
4. Books
5. Internet (it’s my livelihood)
your new list is much improved


7. Describe the last book that you read and enjoyed. What was it about? What did you like most about it?
Difficult question because I read a lot. In the last year, I've done a power read through all of Janet Evanovich's books (primarily the Stephanie Plum series). These have been fun, easy reads. Her character development is good, and she provides a lot of humor in her style. I also enjoy reading Bob Woodward books. The most recent two I've read are Secret Man and Wired. These are much more serious in nature, and provide interesting insights into people and events. Secret Man is about revealing who was Deep Throat and Wired is about the short and hard life of John Belushi.
8. Is there any additional information you would like your matches to know about you?
I'm a vegetarian (but I do eat fish, eggs, and dairy).