Re:Hi Everyone,could I get some critiques of my Profile?(pt.1)

..Person Influenced me..:
There have been many people in my life who have influenced me greatly. They are all very important to me. And, I love them very much. They are my parents and my grandmother. They have all taught me about the importance of love and family. They have taught me about the importance of being there for my loved ones. I have grown-up to be a very caring and loving person. They have also taught me how to be successfull successful. They have taught me how to be a hard-worker, while also realizing the importance of spending time with family and friends. They have all influenced me so much, and for this reason, I am so pleased to have more than one.

..and pt.2

.."looking for."

I am looking for someone who is kind and caring. Someone who also believes in the importance of family. I love spending time with my family and I am looking for someone who would do the same. I am looking for someone who is ambitious, yet, enjoys being either at home or out together. Someone who also enjoys the little things in life. I am looking for someone who has a great personality and a great sense of humor as well.

pt 3..

"People see me as.."

People notice that I am a cheerfull cheerful, kind, and positive person. I always enjoy spending time with people who I have come to know, and always find it rewarding to be able to spend quality time with them. Whether it be going out to brunch, or going to a family gathering, it's the quality time that's important to me.

pt.4

The one thing that I wish people would notice about me is the fact that I am a very outgoing person. If you're outgoing, even people who don't know you are going to notice that! So this answer doesn't make sense to me.

and next..

I am looking forward to meeting someone who I can spend time with and really get to know. I think that it is very important to become friends first. I am looking for a long-term relationship with someone who I will be able to love. I am a very well-rounded person, who enjoys being with the person and people who I care about. I look forward to spending time with someone who has many of the same interests as I do. Which section is this? I'm confused.

and the next..

There are many things that I am passionate about. I am passionate about things that make me truly happy. I love being with caring people. I love being with my family and the man who I care about. I love being outdoors. I love cooking and trying out new recipes. I love gardening while listening to various sporting events on the radio. I also love watching movies and reading with my four-legged children!

Laura8